三、一气呵成,连句成文(约 10 分钟)

按第二步搭好的框架顺序进行写作往往能左右逢源。而这一步实际上就是把第二步的零星材料连句成文。行文要紧扣要点,尽量多用自己熟悉的句型和短语,多用单句,少用结构复杂的复合句。按这步的要求,我们可以起草以下的短文:

My parents live in the countryside,A dog named Ah Fu is kept in my family.

One day, my parents,together with my little sister and Ah Fu, went to work in the fields.

While my Parents were working,followed by Ah Fu,my sister walked to a river nearby.She wanted to pick some wild flowers.Suddenly, she fell into the river and cried for help.Ah Fu barked at my parents and then jumped into the river to save my little sister.

At the sound of the dog,my parents dashed to the river. They saw Ah Fu struggling in the water with my sister on its back,trying to get to the bank.

My sister was saved by Ah Fu.she was safe and sound.Ah Fu was highly praised by my parents for had it not been for Ah Fu my sister would have drowned to death.